Volcanoes
hello my name is reef
and we have bean practsing how to wright a dicripshin and this is my writing
by reef
There is black & gray ash coming out the top of the volcano. The lava is pouring down the mountain, it is sizzling hot.
Sparks of lava are flying everywhere. It is scary. The lava was slowly moving down the volcano. Lava is flying up into the air. The ground is shaking.
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Kia ora Reef, thank you for sharing your work. What a great piece of writing! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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